HighRiseFitness.comLogo Design Contest

#23 I will move to the 'no thanks' basket because it feels a bit static - especially the word "Fitness".

#20 I will aslo move to the 'no thanks' basket because I don't like the person standing in between two buildings and he is as tall as a building... just feel somewhat wrong?

#21 and #22 I will rank for now, want to follow this direction - NOW, I wonder if the colours could be a bit more simple can you try to be more simple? eg play with shades of the same colour and one neutral (grey?)

Right now colourwise it looks a bit busy to me...

Thanks for your work!

Thank you for the comments I'll update my entries with your preferred guide & make some improvements.

Thanks! Perhaps you can also make 'HighRise' a bit larger, it feels slightly too small compared to 'fitness'. I want people to remember the website URL address, and they may forget 'HighRise' that comes before 'fitness' if the letters are too small on the logo...

#29 the font in 'fitness' looks a bit static, so I put it into 'no thanks' bin

#28 replaced #21 in the rankings, so #21 is in the 'no thanks' bin now.

Regarding #28 (which I prefer to #27 because it is more representative of a big city life. #27 is more tourist attraction type of picture...)

to keep:
- like the dynamic logo
- like the way 'fitness' is more prominent than anything else

sugget to try:
- simplify the colour pattern: max two different colours, one one colour plus one neutral
- increase 'High Rise' as I suggested before
- try even more 'relaxed' font - please take a look at a piece of promotional material I am using for this project, it may help to understand what i mean by 'relaxed' font:
http://www.pbase.com/image/142695212.jpg

Thanks
Olga

Hi thanks for the wonderful suggestions I'll keep on updating the entries as we go ahead.

The font on http://www.pbase.com/image/142695212.jpg can we use this as well or just a sample though?

Yes sure feel free to use this font - provided it fits - I like it alot!

Hi,
regarding new entries -

#50 'Fitness' word feels too upright and 'square', prefer two other, 'leaner' versions (#48 and #49)

Between those two, prefer the font on #48 but picture on #49 - for the reasons explained above (the picture on #48 is too touristy)

Thank you!
Olga

I'm still thinking the picture on #28 has potential if supplemented with the right 'balanced' text and the colour patters is simplified to max two colours.

Hi sorry for delayed response I cannot submit entries for now must be in top5 position in order to submit changes if you re-rank temporarily with the designer entries you like to have changes I can do more font type revisions thanks.