This references entry 8, 9, 10 and 11. I liked where you are going, but this house design is just not something that is working for me. I do like the idea of a graphic or a house like you have done before. Maybe try a more traditional house design.
Can you try making the graphic without the color gradient? I would like to see what that looks like too since we have to print on shirts, etc. Also, can you try a different font? I'd like to see some comparisons.
We love the font layout in 73 and 74! If we could get happy with the house we might there. We like the more polished feel of this house but we don't like all of the lines in the middle of it. Hope that helps!