dotwoman - I would love to see more designs from you since directionally I still like this idea the best but prefer the stronger, more serious graphics in my currently ranked number one logo. See my new input. Thanks and hoping you will continue since I love your portfolio! Tammy
Wow! You have been busy. Really like the new designs. Thank you so very much for continuing to send designs. Would, however, like to see a more sophisticated treatment of the wings. Also, like the graphic in the round circle but could it look like earth without being too busy since the company will be operating worldwide? Thanks again...you are very talented! Tammy
Wow! You just keep on impressing me. Not sure the balance of the wings is quite working yet. Can you make them larger and possibly extend out beyond the circle slightly like the DNA does at the bottom? Also, the slightly fatter wings (now that I see the skinnier ones) work better...or maybe something in between?
With respect to color, can you try for a blue and green like in the Keiser Chiropractic logo in the first attached PowerPoint since I am going for a bit of a more sophisticated tone. I had a logo designed with that blue and I believe that it is 116 145 202. I can try to find the green as well if that helps.
Also, can I see what the logo with the world will look like in black and white to be sure it isn't too busy?
Let me know if I am driving you crazy...but you are definitely way in the lead!
Hi Tammy and thanks for your great feedback! We designers LOVE good feedback as it helps us give you exactly what you want! Here are a few more revisions for you... I would appreciate the #s on the green as I cannot open your attachments. Thanks Karen
Sorry to keep refining, but hopefully it doesn't take you too long??? We are very, very close and I am loving it! Let's focus on the designs above since I like the circle with extended type the best.
Since you can't open my files, can you either send me your email address (if that isn't against the rules) so that I can send them to you or Google "Seattle Grace Hospital logo" to see the wing treatment. I am thinking that the wings still do not look as sophisticated as the rest of the logo.
I do like the bigger wings in #48 (versus the ones in #41) with the tips extending out beyond the circle since I think it looks more balanced, but maybe a slightly different version of the wings per the above.
I really like the logo better with the world in the background, but wonder if it can be a lighter shade of maybe khaki green so that the caduceus isn't lost?!
I prefer the dimension in #41 but wonder if you can add dimension (if that's what you call that effect) in the cauduceus or at least the wings so that it isn't a "flat" image on a dimensional image. Tell me if that doesn't make sense.
Last, but not least, I probably gave you a bum steer on the colors since I prefer the colors in #41 to the more subdued colors I gave you. Can you find a deep blue and khaki green (I will look, too) that match and try the HEAVEN and WAIT and tagline in blue and the CAN in khaki green.
Ooops...one more thing... I see a bit of red in the DNA. Is the logo three (black, blue, green) or four colors?
Thanks again and looking forward to your next versions and possibly finalizing today or tomorrow!
Still not sure I like the wings. Looking for something more sophisticated and thought Seattle Grace might be it...but not. Like the wings better in #65 but still not sure. Can you show me that one to me in a larger version so I can be more helpful? Any other ideas for wings?
I really like the new type colors - do you?
Also, is the world blue a toned down shade of the new typefont blue? If so, can we try making it a bit darker?
And, can I see the DNA without the red since I would like to print in only three versus four colors or does it make a difference in terms of print costs at that point???
I have gotten the red out... as well as the green and blue in the DNA, I think it works better. Having the logo above or to the side is both a personal choice and depends on where/how you wish to use it... one acts as more of a square logo, the other as more horizontal. I think it is flexible enough once we get the graphic refined to your liking, you can use it either way. Thank you for your continued feedback.
Thanks again for doing these so quickly and for your input. Not sure if I don't prefer the multi-colored DNA now that I see the two side by side, but will check with my partner tonight. Also, asking the printer that the cost differential will be for 3 v 4 colors.
Still looking to see a version with the blue in the world punched up a bit? Is it a shaded down version of the blue in the type or a completely different blue?
Still also looking maybe for layered horizontal verus vertical wings like an owls (if that makes sense). I will try to find something but would appreciate your ideas, too (since rest is close to perfect)!
See uploaded file titled Wings.pptx. Let me know. Would want the wings to be like the ones you have now colorwise but with a different more sophisticated shape. Thanks, Tammy
Can you do #71 with the wings a bit more "grayed out" if that makes sense so they aren't so white. And, can I see a version with the tagline in blue just to be sure. We are almost there! Thanks, Tammy
What is the difference between #74 (does this one have slightly whiter wings?) and #75? I probably should be able to tell, but...
I will need a TM next to Heaven Can Wait.
Still not sure if I like the whiter wings in #71 and still not sure if I like the blue or green tagline better...will need to wait until tonight to ask my partner!
If it is not too much trouble, can you provide versions of the final four (#71, #73, #74 and #75) with the graphic on the side so that I can see the differences in both formats???
Thanks! I will get confirmation on the wings and tagline tonight and will then re-rank and award the job to you tomorrow. Will also need the TM on the logos with the graphic on top, but you can wait until I select the final design rather than re-doing all of them. Thanks again for everything. I love it! Tammy