re: #174, #175. very impressive. Only a few minor change suggestions and these will be ready for client review.
re: #174 - would like to see the second line of text less bold - thinner will read better. First one in the competition to put a hat on the logo - well thougth of. Staying with that theme, woudl like to see some color variates that represent earth, texas, the southwest in the USA. odd combinations are OK. Same comment about the "of" text in line 1. Last, the graphic underneath the hat, perhaps consider breaking this up into multiple colors --- your creative choice. good luck.
re: # 175 - only thing I'd like to see is some variations of the "of" typefont. With the current one, the "f" looks too curvy on top. Perhaps even the suggestion of something curvise or different. I'll leave it up to you. would also like to see several colors options and combinations - looking for some spark !
one additional thought, I would like to see design #175 with the graphic on the left havea different coor on the bottom half (split color) would like your creative take on this -- colors are your choice to start. thank you
re: # 226 interesting, but I would like to see this in a powerblue background and whit letters for the 2nd line of text. The "OF" still needs to be adjusted, slightly smaller and more bold. -- this has a nice feel to it.
I want to try one last color concept. with #175 - would like 1st row of text in a charcoal grey color (closer to black, but very dark) ON the graphic there are essentially (6) segemetns that make up the graphic. I would like to try to color each one differently one version with different primary colors, and one version of One color, just different saturation values (like it grows). I'll leave it up to yu to present something and then we can have a final tweak. Early next week I will be reviewing with the client - final decision is up to them. thanks for all your effort - well done.
re: #254 - looking over the design again, we would like to see the "OF" just a bit smaller so that the text doesn't run all together. spacing can stay the same .... thank you.
re:#273, 274,275. A few comments. Always a good idea to take some time away from looking at designs. You have a different perspective when you come back. Good news is, the little remaining twEaks I have are just micro-refinements to make your designs that much stronger.
re: #273 - would like to see this design, but only with the text font for "Heart" and Texas" from design #175. spacing & colors are just fine.
re: #274 - is a viable option, but lacks the same and punch as some of the others. would like to see the original text color back on this and to have you add something small to the graphic. If you look at any of the designs with the black background and then look at the graphic, the top of the separation line has a small curved end and little connection piece with the top of the graphic (liTtle tab shape). When it is in a white background you lose this (would like to have you add a thin blue line that creates this. Last, the graphic looks to have a color gradient on it. woudl like to see the lower color just a shade lighter and closer to the top color. want this to be very subtle. much appreciated.
re: #275 - worth a try and also a viable option, but personally it think it is visually a bit much. thks for the effort though.
re: #279, i spoke too early. this looks more inviting with the gradient added and lowered separation line. If i could see this with the blue 1st line of text, this design may be ready for client review.
re: #283. good edit. only left to change is the graphic "ring" see #273. Perhaps you a re already working on this, but wanted to reiterate what we are looking for. in #373 the separation line makes a white tilted "ring" shape. would like to see this same shape in #283 - currently ou anno becasue it is on a white background. the addition of a thin line to craet the ooutline of that shape will add soem dimensionality to this design. other than that, it looks great - tks for the updates.
re: #290. still not there. I want the overall shape of the graphic to be the exact one in #273, but only with the color gradients from #290. then of course a thin line (smaller than #290).
last, once the shape is there, i woudl like to see 1 version with color gradients, and 1 vrsion like #285. tks for all your efforts - sometimes tweaking is the hardst part. we're really close.
re: #310 - somewhere along the way, the paw pad has grown a small tick mark toward the top(you can see some color from behnd it) this needs to be removed. your changes look great. Curious as to what this would look like if the outside lines your added were just in a neutral or light grey - more of an accent than seeing color added. I just feel the color is a bit distracting. other than that, this design is done.
re: #307, this just needs the little tick mark remove and needs the two outline additions added. these are OK to be in the same blue color as the rest of the graphic. thanks again ....... these changes should also brign a close to this design too. Then decision will be up to client. good luck.
all request changes look great. i think this entry is done. would like to see both #313 and 314 with light grey background like in #265. with #313 let the white space in the graphic also become light grey color. with #314, leave the whit ring and paw in graphic white. Would also like to see #314 with a very light powerderblue (pastel) background. Use the same hue as the text, but with lightness value of say 10-15%. as I mentioned before - great work, very please with your efforts.
You too. your designs are well thought out and you understand well how to make changes. some designers it takes a long time to explain changes -- you are good with this. everything looks great, but I forgot to ask for one last "black version". I'm trying to give client many optons odf each design to help make decision. I would like 1 version with black background and let the paw and separation line also be black. And 1 black version with a reflection of graphic on floor (as if it were sitting on black acrylic table (like how many comapnies shoe products). thanks again for your great timing. it has been a pleasure working with you. good luck.
re: #321 - just a small tweak. please remove the reflection for the text (this is visually too much). With the reflection of the graphic, if possible can you have it stretch a little to the left instead of straight down. And also have the fade happen sooner. You may have to make the logo wider on that side to accomodate the change. If the reflection doesn't look quite even, you may have to cheat the graphic by pushing it up a bit. This is just a last option for the client. thank you and good night from the USA.
re: #314. Color change request. Almost no one has really played off the southwest them in terms of color selection. Would like to see this design in a yellow-orange of somesort. Imagine a beautiful sunset in the West. Perhaps a gradient of some sort. Or even a color with a colored outlint --- lookign for soemthing different - this design is simple enough to do this ---- good luck.