I think I like this one best of the butterfly/caterpillar series. I would like to have one grass blade going the other direction and the biggest one a little more vertical to lift the cocoon back up over the "H". Also, I'd like the butterfly to be resting on the leaf.
Oh, yeah! I love this without the bird! (too much going on with the bird) Maybe another blade of grass in it's place? I don't know how to make the caterpillar and chrysalis stand out more... they are a little lost at a distance.
We like this one a lot. Nice balance and color... font okay. The image is beautiful... not sure that it offers the feel of balance and transformation, exactly, and it's a little whispy... I'd love to see what you could do with the chrysalis to butterfly idea.
What we most liked about your past wins was the creative depiction of the business concepts... our favorites were the "Jersey Girls" and "Gras Hupfer" logos.
I think I like this font best. I like the big moon behind... would like to see images that better represent balance, health, transformation, growth... and maybe integrate the image and the text more...
This is beautiful! There is a lot going on, though, and it is still very suggestive of the female reproductive system, which we are not intending to highlight. I don't care for the font, also.
I am particularly interested in your take on this... I am liking the sense of TRANSFORMATION with the apple/heart/sprout logo. I was thinking that something depicting caterpillar/chrysalis to butterfly could work... maybe with a subtle chrysalis on the left of the text and a not-so-subtle butterfly around or behind it (?).
Hi! Welcome to the contest! We love these entries and your past wins. These current entries are very suggestive of the female reproductive system, which is a little more "feminine" than we are looking for. We are excited to see what else you come up with. We are appreciating relatively abstract, colorful representations of elemental energy (earth, air, fire, water, healthiness and happiness.
Our business will be supplying a line of health food products, as well as nutritional therapy assessment and education for all genders and races.
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What we most liked about your past wins was the creative depiction of the business concepts... our favorites were the "Jersey Girls" and "Gras Hupfer" logos.
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i will change my works, ASAP
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Maybe one of the birds, asymmetrically with green vine (?) more integrated with the font? I would like to see this with alternate fonts, too.
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Our business will be supplying a line of health food products, as well as nutritional therapy assessment and education for all genders and races.