#40 has potential, again with the ahapua’a theme. But our mountains are green not brown, and so is our fertile plains. Id rather see the “ko’olaus” instead of a volcano looking brown monolith. The leaf in the water is a bit distracting unless its faded out.
In old Hawaiʻi, ahupuaʻa was the common subdivision of the land. It consisted most frequently of a slice of an island that went from the top of the local mountain (volcano) to the shore, often following the boundary of a stream drainage. Each ahupuaʻa included a lowland mala (cultivated area) and upland forested region.
Dear contest holder Thank you for your comment. the contest is in judging mode and although I would love to work on your logo further, I can’t because due to contest rules only the number one ranked design can submit revisions. If you think that you would like to see something more developed according to your requirements I’ll be more than happy to work further on your logo but I am at your disposal. Kind regards Tzina
Dear contest holder Thank you for your ranking. if you need adjustments don't hesitate to contact me. I love working on your logo. Lets reach the point that you are happy with the logo. best regards Tzina (lotus creative)