Alot different and better try some different looks in back gound try yellow instead of red. Put a manta rey in upper right. Also Here in Hawaii we have hawaiian borders or tribal borders please google to find I want the Border to go on bottom of logo as far down as needed. In between I would like to see 4 figures this is what I do here in Hawaii
change Stand up paddler to Kayaker.
Put between border and hawaii these figures
Kayaker
snorkeler with mask and fins
Stand up Paddle Boarder
hiker
One last request add a shark there move what ever you have there if that is a snorkeler please have one bigger and more beleivable
Mahalo Bari for getting this to me you are now the front runner lets finish this
These are awesome okay lets try just couple more things
Pack and paddle make yellow letters and then make background ocean blue or light blue. Borders can you show a few other Hawaiian borders just on the first 3 picks and all other request on same first 3 picks. You have boirder on #58 try that large border on one of them and make them yellow or red. Nice job me and my wife love this look great creativity.
These are awesome okay lets try just couple more things
Pack and paddle make yellow letters and then make background ocean blue or light blue. Borders can you show a few other Hawaiian borders just on the first 3 picks and all other request on same first 3 picks. You have boirder on #58 try that large border on one of them and make them yellow or red. Nice job me and my wife love this look great creativity.
sorry some other details I need you tou put the words where you think can fit and look awesome. This will need to go on logos with newer changes in feedbacks
Bari
Kayak Snorkel Stand -up paddle Hiking Camping Tours