Hawaii Dental Fears ClinicsLogo Design Contest

I like your concept. I don't like the H and the L highlighted. HL doesn't mean anything to me. I would like the graphics for Hawaii emphasize as one separate part of the logo and Dental Fears emphasized as another separate part of the logo.
Albert

Thanks for your feedback, will come back with the required changes, stay tuned.

Please have a look at #27 and #28, with text style changes.

#27 and # 28
Thank you for your efforts. I like the logo portion. I am on the capital island of Hawaii, Oahu. "HAWAII" is a given in Hawaii. DENTAL FEARS is the unique text in logo. I would like the DENTAL FEARS to be more prominent than HAWAII.

i like the logo #28. I like the tooth in the setting of the sun.
I want you to use that portion for another company
called

Hawaii Dental Anesthesia Services
Albert Honda

Thanks. Have you started the competition for Hawaii Dental Anesthesia Services yet?

no, I would like to work with you directly. Is this allowed?

i am not sure. are you verbally in contact with anyone at logotournament.com? maybe they can help.