Gwinnett MagazineLogo Design Contest

please check new entry. thank

thank you very much, because I have participated in the finalists, how about this one? please comment. so I can go in the right direction.
regards firdol

helo ,does anything need to be revised?

how about this ?

thank you for the star rating, for the sake of improving the design, do you have any suggestions or input? I really hope to be able to give you the best.
warm regards firdol

Hello,, this is my design concept
Hope it lives up to expectations
please give feedback like or dislike about this design.
Your feedback is very helpful to achieve the best design.thanks