GulfBusinessesBrokersLogo Design Contest

#20
Very nice but it's not GulBusnessBrokers but GulfBusinessesBrokers : You forget a S (between U and I at buSinesses) and you forget ES because it businessES (plural).

An arabic version should be better : the shadow in arabic font for example.

#21
We prefer the white version even if there is some vocabulary problems...

Hi!

Thanks for your comment, and I sincerely apologize for my bad spelling, I have made some adjustments for what you have asked in this concept and will design an Arabic version shortly. Are you wanting specifically one or the other or do you want the Arabic and English version combined into one?

Thanks,
- Ryan

(This comment references Entry #23)

Hi again,

Here is my arabic version, I believe I translated this properly, but correct me if I am wrong.

Thanks,

Ryan

(This comment references Entry #24)

#23 #24

Hi & thank you.

Indeed we want the Arabic and English version combined into one like the shadow effect in arabic.
We don't speak or read arabic but have some arabic clients. We speak in english with them but I am not sure of your arabic translation.
Don't forget they write from right to left (and read the same way of course).

>>> We prefer arabic and english mixed together in the same logo (2 line for example).

Good job anyway !

Hi,

Thanks for such quick response!

Here is one of my newest concepts including Arabic and English.

Thanks,

Ryan

(This comment references Entry #35)

Hi there,

I have added a couple more new concepts with Arabic and English, including some with reflection and some without.

Thanks,

Ryan


(This comment references Entry #36)

Here is another entry that I have made with the Arabic slightly smaller.

(This comment references Entry #37)

I have added a reflection on the Arabic font as well.

(This comment references Entry #38)

Hi,

Not sure if you prefer the arabic at the top or the bottom, so I have been experementing and tried one with it on the top.

Thanks,

-Ryan

(This comment references Entry #39)

Hi Ryan,

Here are our comments :

#35
In this version, the arabic text is too big. The entire logo become less "classy", without its first size harmony.

#36
This variant is always nice : reflection is too much (see comments about #37)

#37
The nicest if you delete the reflection effet.

#38
With this version we understand now that double reflection (refection effect on each language) is too much. Thank you.

#39
Same comments as #35

Hi,

I have modified this version to adjust the reflection as you have asked.

Thanks,

-Ryan

(This comment references Entry #46)

This one I also modified the reflection.

Thanks again for your feedback.

-Ryan

(This comment references Entry #47)

#46
Very nice !

#47
Very nice too !

Hi!

One other thing I should add is my translation is identical to the business cards Arabic text that you provided as an example, I am sure you noticed this already, but since you don't read Arabic I just thought I would share.

Thanks,

-Ryan

Hi,

Not sure if you are maybe wanting different a different color scheme so I have uploaded a new color set.

-Ryan

(This comment references Entry #84)

Here is another version with no shadow.

(This comment references Entry #85)

I am trying a few different shadows on the logo to see if any appeal to you more.

(This comment references Entry #86)

I have made another version in the new color scheme and included a division line.

(This comment references Entry #87)

Hello,

I have added a shadow to the text as well.

-Ryan

(This comment references Entry #88)

Hello,

I have added a shadow to the main text as well as the Arabic text.

-Ryan

(This comment references Entry #89)

#84 #85 #86 #87
Nice color (a copy of other designers...)

#84
With shadows it's indeed better

#85
We prefer #84 : with shadow

#86
We are flying ! We really prefer this version, very good idea.

#87
too big !

Hi,

This entry I have tried making the Arabic text smaller.

(This comment references Entry #90)