Entry #1: I really enjoy your use of typography here the best. However, I think that the golden baby element could use some work. An illustrated character would make for a greater impact.
Entry #2: The typography here is playful but does not appeal to me. Also, I have the same comment as above regarding the baby - I think more detail in the silhouette would be of benefit.
Entry #3: I really enjoy your concept here but do not care much for the eyes of the child being closed. Also, the hand could use some shading. Finally, the typography choices could also be improved but I enjoy the colors and concept a lot.
Thank you very much for the efforts you are taking in this project. There is much heart, joy, and love in this project and the logos reflect that well - I just think you can continue to refine the light of inspiration which you have started to harness.
Hi and thx very much for your feedback. I've done your requested corrections and took a close look to the gallery. I've chosen this picture to drew since it looked directly to me (the viwer) and since the eyes are the soul window, I've seen there all the life promises... I've also mixed the butterfly since it is a metamorphic symbol, a good comparison for the growing process and it's stages... This allows a simple layout without small details that can be used even in small sizes and keep it's recognizable shape and have a look that is appealing for all ages. I also think it matches your brief requirements very well :-) I'll be at your service till the end of your contest for any input. Wish you a great evening,
Thank you Claudia. I am confirming with my client their input regarding your submissions - you are one of my top choices. Will be in touch very soon. We like your entry #42 the best of your submissions.