This entry is very creative and fun! However, we're going to put this on our bus,so while this is cool for our merchandise...a picture of a bus on a a bus might look silly :) the word "Groovy" might be difficult to read while the bus zooms by, because it's separated that much. Cool idea though!
Since you have mentioned that the logo will be put on the colorful bus, i have provided a white bleed out for the words so that the words are visible . As a designer i feel if plain text will be applied to this colorful background, it wont be readable.
Please let me know if you need any changes in the design
White bleed out or other light color bleed out a must! Thank you! This is getting closer...perhaps a more psychedelic font type...bell bottom looking but still readable. Like the playful OO's...maybe a 70's style happy face or retro flowers could be more groovy!