Hi Slab04, WOW...your design is so simple (I love 'simple' and it is a theme within my brand and my strategy model and what I do for my clients) and it also is incredibly clever the way you have incorporated the G and A into the logo almost like a "crosshairs" on a sniper's rifle. This is interesting to me because my model is all about simplicity but also about targeting into a single simple solution that enables my clients to work less and earn more profit...targeting in or zeroing in on the 1 single simple solution. I would be very interested to see if you could also incorporate magenta into the design and also my tagline phrases "Work Less Earn More" and/or "Sustainable Profit Strategy". Also, I would be interested to see how the design works when the logo is reduced so the entire logo could be made into a horizontal rectangular design to make more flexible for digital (web, email signature) as well as print. At the moment the design is in a square. I hope that this makes sense. Thank you for your great design to date.
Thanks Slab04, the revisited designs are looking really good. I love the way you have incorporated the pink into the logo and I love that you have underlined Profit with a pink swish to highlight it. Would it be possible to perhaps soften the block capital font, perhaps keeping block capitals but just with a softer font or perhaps also changing from block capitals (though I suspect this may not work as well with the rectangular horizontal design). Also, can you tell me what your reason was for adding a blue circle in the A at Aleckson? I don't mind it but I wasn't sure why it was that way. Thanks again!
Thank you for your feedbackand rank me #1 !! do you mean you want me to change the font from all capital to normal like entry #26? adding the circle is just to make the A looks like a pointer.
Hi Slab04, I really like the changes you have made with #92 (the tick has some significance because it is a part of my model) and #93 (I love the addition of the logo in the O). The font style and size works quite well in both of these too. Would you be able to try a few experiments for me including: 1. Change the letters to normal (first letter of each word capital/uppercase and the rest lowercase). Perhaps the "Greg" could be stacked on top of the "Aleckson" but I will leave that to you to decide if you would like to do this. 2. Change the letters to all lowercase 3. Split the colour in the logo at letter 'O' to include both blue and pink (currently it is just pink which I do like but I would be interested to see with both colours also. 4. A new version that includes both tagline phrases "Work Less Earn More" and "Sustainable Profit Strategy". I appreciate that you may not be able to complete all of these so whatever you are able to do would be great. Thanks again!
Hi Slab 04, I am just wondering if you have had a chance to consider my comments on April 28th at 5:40am? I would love to see some options on your design just to see if some refining could further improve it.
Hi again Slab04, Have you reviewed my last 2 comments yet? I would like to add to those comments by also asking you to do another design (in addition to the new designs I asked for in my previous comments) to incorporate both tag lines one above the other something like this "Work Less Earn More" "Sustainable Profit Strategy" I would prefer that the "Work Less Earn More" was in a larger font and so was in line with "Sustainable Profit Strategy" which would be in a smaller font size. I am looking forward to seeing what you can come up with. Thank you very much
Hi Slab04, Thank you for submitting amended designs with some of my comments included. I really like #162 and would like to see a version of that but with both taglines included if possible?
Hi Slab04, thanks for the additional updates...I like them all and now I am actually finding it very hard to rank them. I will try to rank them by putting 1 at Rank #1 and the rest at rank 6 and so on...I don't want you to remove any though as I may re-rank them over the next day or so. Thanks again, Greg