First, thank you very much for your submission. For feedback, I would guide you toward my comment on the briefing that discusses form-factor. We need a logo where the text is going to be readable. I'm just afraid that if we put this on our products you wouldn't be able to read it unless a) you were VERY close to the logo or b) the whole logo was very large. So, if you could take your concepts and ideas and make the text a bit larger and more readable it would be closer to what we're looking for. I never expected these types of colors, but to be honest I kind of like them. They feel very natural and wholesome. I would love to see more designs from you if you are willing to take the time. Thanks again for your submission.