If you're OK with giving me a couple variations on the tagline, I'm happy to approve the logo now. I just don't know which tagline I'm ultimately going to use. Is that OK with you?
HI there - I didn't see "CLARITYISPOWER.NET" or "STORIES THAT SELL"... but I did get extra copies of "WE BUILD STORYBRANDS." Could you please resend the two I didn't get? I can approve the logo tonight.
I really like how this logo looks with 3 words. It's just so much easier to read!! I'm going to give you a few other 3-word taglines to try. Here you go:
What do you need from me? I just asked for you to create two additional variations of the logo in the first ranking. I'd like to see it with 2 different options for the tagline. As requested above. Thank you.
Hi - not sure I understand your question. No need for script type on this logo. Just try capitalizing the word GRAYSON in the same font and play around with two chat boxes to the left side, thanks!
Hi there - would you mind trying something for me on this concept? Let's drop the 3 dots in the chat box and add a second chat box going the other direction to signify a two-way conversation. Also, please put GRAYSON in all caps, thanks!
I have reached out to logo tournament to alert them to what happened. You'll probably hear from Ivan soon. I don't believe it was fair to either of us and I've asked them to review their policy.
No, not necessarily! I am just trying to find the best logo for my business and the 2 logos we've been working on together for the past couple days have some limitations when I try to use them on my website. They are not out of the running by any means. I have an option to redesign the header of my website if I decide to make one of those work. They're just not working right now.
I love your logos and definitely feel you deserve to win simply based on your time, energy, care, concern, and responsiveness to my requests. I'm taking all of that into consideration as I finalize my decision.
I understand your need to pause, but please don't give up. You still have several logos ranked in the top 5-6 and all of the other designers only have one in the running.
I am very grateful to you for everything and genuinely hope you'll end up with the winning logo... we have a couple more days to see how things shake out.
it seems I will give up until here. I have sent more than 70 designs to you and according to what you want and have taken up my mind and time. It seems like you will choose someone else.
Perfect, thanks. It's exactly what I asked for, but I'm still not loving it. Not sure what to suggest to make it better though. It just seems a little to simple/plain. Maybe a different font for the main words "grayson MEDIA" but I'll leave the ideas up to you, thanks!
Same thing on this one, please remove the 3 dots on the front of the word "marketing" and have the tagline look exactly like it does in logo #183, thanks!
Would you mind continuing to evolve this concept for me? I One idea I had was to make the chat box solid, put the 3 dots in it, and pull it all the way to the left of the logo. Then drop the 3 dots from the left side of the tagline and put the dashes back on both sides of the tagline. Thanks for trying this!
I like it!!! I love, love, love the other logos but I'm struggling to make them work on my header of my website because they're so soft and subtle. My website is pretty bodacious, so I need a logo that matches that. Have you had a chance to look at my website? www.grayson-media.com. I love this. Thank you.
Can you try making the chat box in the background smaller? I may need this logo to ultimately be a wider rectangle shape to work at the top of my home page on my website, thanks!
Hi there - this is leading the pack. Can you please try one variation for me? Please remove the 3 blue dots from the background image so it's just an empty chat box... then change the tagline to be:
••• MARKETING STRATEGIES THAT WORK
So there are no dashes on the sides. Does that make sense? Thanks!
Hi there - I am getting feedback from friends that they like everything about this logo except that the script font is too busy. Can you keep everything about this logo exactly the same but try other font ideas for just the main words "grayon media" -- thanks!
Thanks! Could you try something in blue? Maybe one version with the chat box in transparent blue? And one version with the words "grayson media" in blue? Thanks!
You certainly have and I'm very grateful! I don't know if you see rankings, but you have 10 logos out of the 25 or so that I'm still watching. =) Great job! Thank you!
this is my record at the qualification stage, only this time I reached 50 submissions ... haha
I just hope you get the best here and I'm trying to give the best for you.
Yes, this is what I meant, thank you. Can you please rework the tagline so that it fits under the "son media" part -- and doesn't cut into the g and the y?
I see that you have dropped the scripted font in the background. That is the first step, thanks. Now select the words "grayson media" and change the font to something scripted that looks nice with the tagline. (Don't change the tagline, thanks!)
Hi there - I think I might not be communicating clearly. I'm sorry. As you'll see when you go to the Jane Iredale site, in her logo, her name is shown in a scripted font. So here's what I'm hoping you can help me create.
1. The words "grayson media" (shown here in grey as "Grayson Media") in LOWER CASE and in a scripted font. You can use the scripted font that you're using for the word "grayson" (shown here in a transparent blue behind the works "Grayson Media").
2. Then delete the word "grayson" in transparent blue in the background.
Sure, are you able to go to www.janeiredale.com and see their logo? It's just a simple scripted font over a simple tagline. I'd like to see just "grayson media" (lower case" in the scripted font with the tagline below it. Do you want me to upload a screen shot of the Jane Iredale logo to the creative brief?
Hi there -- I was just shopping on www.janeiredale.com when I noticed their logo. Could you please pop over to their website to see it? I'd like to see my logo in this concept. Thank you!
Hi there - can I please see this version with the updated script in the background? (i.e. the same script/font/color that you used in the background on logo #55) - thanks!
Hi there - Hi - this is the Hex Code 0E88AD from my website. Obviously too dark to hang in the background without transparency. Would you mind trying this color on the scripted word "grayson" in the background -- super transparent? Thanks so much!
I showed this to my husband and he'd like to see it with the words "GRAYSON MEDIA" in the gray with the transparent stuff in the background in the teal, thanks!
I think it's really great! I think if I end up choosing it, we'd have to finesse the transparency on that light gray in the background cuz right now the words "GRAYSON MEDIA" are pretty hard to read, but I think this is a unique concept that I had not thought of. Definitely a great option, thank you!!
Same thing with this one... I can tell the scripted word Grayson is behind the type but I can't see it unless I drag/drop of the logo to take a screen shot of it...?
I can't tell the difference between 63 and 64....? They look the same to me. What I don't see is the scripted/transparent text with the lower-case word "grayson" behind the words GRAYSON MEDIA. Unless I'm missing something?
Yes, thanks. I like this. Is it easier to read with the script behind it, isn't it? But I miss having a little artistic flair.
Curious how would it look with the transparent light grey scripted type behind it?
Maybe try it two ways... one with the full word "grayson" written out (like on on the other one) and maybe one with just the "GM"...
Also, did you notice that I added one thought to my creative brief? Since I am selling CLARITY in messaging, I thought about adding a chat box graphic to the logo. Is that crazy? The idea is that I'm trying to tell them that I can help them better TALK about their brand.
If it doesn't inspire you, disregard. Just a thought. Thanks1
Hi again - can you please do one variation on this one for me? Please make the type blue and the transparent script super light grey. Just want to see how it looks if we swap the colors on those 2 art elements, thanks!
Can you also please try a variation on this one? Just type the word "GRAYSON" in "GRAYSON MEDIA" in all caps... just to see how that contrasts with the transparent type in lower case in the background, thanks!
Can you do a variation on this one for me? Instead of the transparent gray "GM" in the background, can you type the word "clarity" in lower case letters?
On the blue transparent type in the background, can you try angling it up slightly? So the left side is down slightly and the right side is up slightly? Not sure I'll like it, but it may help people figure out what those squiggles are, thanks!
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... the only one I'm missing is "stories that sell"
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STORIES THAT SELL
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YOUR MARKETING GUIDE
STORYBRAND CERTIFIED GUIDE
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On the first version, please change the tagline to:
WE BUILD BRANDS
On the second version, please change the tagline to:
WE BUILD STORYBRANDS
(this replaces "Marketing Strategies That Work"
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only put the tagline in the chat box.
And maybe try Grayson Media in initial cap like this: "Grayson Media" (where only the G and M are capitalized), thanks!
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I love your logos and definitely feel you deserve to win simply based on your time, energy, care, concern, and responsiveness to my requests. I'm taking all of that into consideration as I finalize my decision.
I understand your need to pause, but please don't give up. You still have several logos ranked in the top 5-6 and all of the other designers only have one in the running.
I am very grateful to you for everything and genuinely hope you'll end up with the winning logo... we have a couple more days to see how things shake out.
Again, very grateful for all that you've done.
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Do you have any ideas that would put the chat box to the left side of the logo?
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Can you try making the chat box in the background smaller? I may need this logo to ultimately be a wider rectangle shape to work at the top of my home page on my website, thanks!
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So there are no dashes on the sides. Does that make sense? Thanks!
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I just hope you get the best here and I'm trying to give the best for you.
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Can you try changing the dash before the tagline to 3 dots...? Thanks!
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1. The words "grayson media" (shown here in grey as "Grayson Media") in LOWER CASE and in a scripted font. You can use the scripted font that you're using for the word "grayson" (shown here in a transparent blue behind the works "Grayson Media").
2. Then delete the word "grayson" in transparent blue in the background.
Hope that makes sense, thanks !
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Curious how would it look with the transparent light grey scripted type behind it?
Maybe try it two ways... one with the full word "grayson" written out (like on on the other one) and maybe one with just the "GM"...
Also, did you notice that I added one thought to my creative brief? Since I am selling CLARITY in messaging, I thought about adding a chat box graphic to the logo. Is that crazy? The idea is that I'm trying to tell them that I can help them better TALK about their brand.
If it doesn't inspire you, disregard. Just a thought. Thanks1
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On the blue transparent type in the background, can you try angling it up slightly? So the left side is down slightly and the right side is up slightly? Not sure I'll like it, but it may help people figure out what those squiggles are, thanks!
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... and then drop the "GM" to the left of the words "Grayson Media" - thanks!!
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Also, please try making the words "grayson MEDIA" in dark grey, thanks!
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1. write out the word "grayson" in lower case
2. pull back the opacity and ghost it behind the words "Grayson Media"
Thank you!
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