Gravelujah!Logo Design Contest

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We like this one better. Maybe the halo need to be a little bit smaller, but this is closer. Thank you!

like this ?

Yes, this is closer. The texture is nice. Now it just needs to read more like a halo...higher in the front and lower in the back. It still looks too flat to us. Thanks, Mashel.

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Thank you, Mashel. This is close, but the halo is still a little too clean/uniform/skinny when compared to the typography which is more bold and rough. The halo still needs more texture. And, it needs to have some depth. Right now, it reads like an oval sitting on top of the "l' instead of a halo. Thank you!

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This halo is good, we just want the empty space filled and the blob at the top cleaned up. And then it just needs to be slightly bolder and moved down to the right without touching the "u". Thank you! : )

We love this font though. It's perfect.

We liked the texture of the first one better. We just wanted it to be more consistent all the way around. There was a spot that was too solid and a spot that was empty. This is too much of a line without any texture. Does that make sense?

how about this ?

This is closer. I think the halo is still a little too large and too inconsistent in texture, but it's close. Thank you.

what do you think ?

We like the font. Can we get the letters a little bit closer together? Thanks!

like this ?

The shape is about right, now we just want it about half this size and moved up so it's placed around the top of the "l" without overlapping the "u". And, we'd like to see the halo more consistent with regard to the lines. Does that make sense?

different fonts

how about this ?

This is closer, but the halo is still too large, too low, and tilted backwards.

The font is good. Thank you. We still don't like the wheel. We'd like it to be a halo over the "l" and much smaller.

Thank you for your submission. This design is a a lot more refined than what we are looking for. We like that you made the halo look like a rim and tire. We'd like to see it more halo-like (smaller) and tilted back instead of forward. And, the font needs to be more rough. We'd love to see more.

what do you think , any suggestion ?