Grace Bible Church HonoluluLogo Design Contest

Thank you very much for the ranking on #50. I've posted a few other revisions. Any feedback you can provide would be appreciated.

Thanks again,

Jason

Thanks for the ideas, Jason. Is there a way to simplify the design of flame and overall design? Maybe a bit too much going on.

Thanks for your feedback...:-) #67, #68, #69 and #70 have the changes you requested.

I've been looking for a different font for the text. Is this one close enough to the example you provided or do I need to keep looking? To be honest, I'm not exactly satisfied with the one I'm using so far.

Thanks again.

I think I'm liking the font in #74 better.

font in #74 much better.

can you shrink the flame further and make more subtle next to "grace"?

#77 has a smaller flame and I've enlarged "grace" to make it the focal point. I think you're right. That looks much better...:-)

Thanks again.

Still liking the font in #74/#75, but wonder if you could add some unique style to the "grace" font. Looks a little generic. Could also be a bit more masculine/strong.

Hope that helps. Thanks.

#87, #88, #89, #90, #91 and #92 are variations of #74 and #77 with different styles used for "grace". I also gave the underline an upward slant with a brushstroke-like period at the end based on the feedback you provided on the main page. Also, on #87, #88 and #89, I stylized the flame with the same style as "grace".

Please let me know if you'd like to see anything different or if I'm not quite on the mark of what you needed on this go-around.

Thanks again and have a blessed day.

Jason

Hey, Jason,

Thanks for making the changes to the underline. #92 looks close.

Our general feedback is that "grace" has a good look, but a bit too conservative and un-original.

We'd like the word-mark to be distinct and recognizable.

Strong/bold over standard and conservative.

Hope the feedback helps.

Clifton

Clifton,

Thanks so much for your feedback. I think I've got a couple new fonts lined up that will make a big difference. I think one in particular is very similar to your example font, but I'll let you be the judge...:-)

For now, I'm off to bed. I'll have the updates up tomorrow after I get off work.

Thanks again,

Jason

Clifton,

While it's not a perfect match, I think #111 is pretty close to the font in the example you've given. I've pulled out a couple of other fonts that I'll get posted shortly. But I wanted you to have a look at this one right away.

Thank you again,

Jason

#114 is the same font, but in lower case. Thought it might good to show that version as well.

#118 and #120 have a different font.

#159, #160, #161 and #162 all have a completely unique "grace". The reason I can make that statement is because they are my handwriting...:-) With the exception of the text "Bible Church Honolulu", these are completely hand-drawn.

The ideas have been getting better and better.

We decided not to rush a decision but to let the ideas be refined further over 5 days of competion.

Your hard work and time is so appreciated.

#111 and #92 are our favorite so far.

Thank you very much...:-) Please let me know if you need any other revisions.

Have a wonderful Christmas.

Jason

On #181 and #182, I've put in a background like the sample (Kaleo) logo.

#198 and #199 are my latest revisions.

Thanks for all the work you've been giving us, Jason.

You are most welcome. Feel free to let me know if there is anything else you need...:-)

Have a great day.

Clifton,

#261 and #262 are my latest entries. I'm introducing the element of the cross using the horizontal bar as the "swoosh" underlining "Grace".

Thanks again.

Jason