Hello, Here's my first entry for your logo. Please let me know if you would like anything changed. i'd be happy to make any revisions you might want. (such as removing the helmet) Thanks! Pam
Hi, Here's a revision of my most recent entry, #19. I wasn't sure which of my entries you were referring to, so I revised the most recent one. You can reference designs by their entry number by typing the # sign followed by the number, (no space in between; like this: #19) I tilted the face up more, and moved it further into the heart per your request. I also darkened the 3 stars. I changed the font and the placement of it, but not really sure I interpreted the last part of your comment correctly. Please advise on this. Also, you suggested possibly showing more diversity and age. Do you want more than one profile inside the heart? Thanks! Pam
Hello Pam, We like entry # 31 because the face is looking up. We prefer to have the text on the right and we're looking to change the font a bit. We really LOVE the entry # 29 font and typography and the layout, but we prefer the blue stars and the face looking up. Can we see a blue star with a red background, and change the red face to a white silhouette.One more thing, the military hat needs to look more prominent, and no need to show hair. Also consider showing multiple facial silhouettes in different colors to show diversity. Hope to hear from you soon.
Adding to last comment, try outlining the blue stars in white instead of gold and make the red a darker red like the original logo. thank you. #34 is my favorite because the helmet is more prominent
Hi! Thanks for the feedback. I'll make the requested revisions and resubmit the revised #34.
I'll revise the style, but it's against LogoTournament's code of conduct, and my ethics as a designer, to copy another designer's idea/concept (referencing #21). Please understand I will make every effort to come up with something that you will like equally as well.
Hi, Here's the requested revision of #34. Let me know if you would like any further revisions of this. I'd be happy to do it. Thanks for the feedback! It's appreciated and welcomed! Pam