GOOSE 25Logo Design Contest

hi, here's my submission for you. Any feedback would be appreciated.

Thanks

Thank you for your submission. I am looking to turn him 90 degrees from top center. As if he is pointing the GOOSE can at me.

okay, but the contest will be goes to top5 phase in the next couple hours. So please give me a rank so I can still continue to submit at top5 phase. I hope you can be patient to wait since illustration work is really time consuming.

BTW, do you mind if I show you some sketches / outlines of the goose revisions before I refining it with 3D looks? Just wanted to make sure whether I'm on the right track or not before I go any further. No worries, I'll do my best for you :)

Thanks,
Ryo

Ryo, I do not mind outlines. Thank you. Jim

Hi Jim, my apologize for the delay. Here are the sketches #11 #12
If you still wanted to see another variations for the sketch, please feel free to ask.

Thanks!

Thanks Ryo for adding more.

I was looking to tun him just slightly similar to the kool aid man picture at the top of this blog...
http://www.digitaloperative.com/blog/2012/3-tips-for-your-content-marketing-from-the-kool-aid-man/

Thanks, Jim

Thanks Ryo for adding more.

I was looking to tun him just slightly similar to the kool aid man picture at the top of this blog...
http://www.digitaloperative.com/blog/2012/3-tips-for-your-content-marketing-from-the-kool-aid-man/

Thanks, Jim

Hi jim.. i'm afraid i'm bit lost here... so you would like to have the goose facing front to the audience, holding the can and cigar with his left and right hand? Didn't the earlier version already shown like that? Or maybe do you have any other sample?

I will keep it easy for you and just ask that we use the first entry. Please remove flystrong from his red hat. Keep the hat red. Can you change the color on his cheek to look more grey? or natural? Thanks.

Hi Jim, thanks so much for the feedback. Here are the updates #13 #14