Golden RiversLogo Design Contest

I like where this is going as well .This entry and 8 are taking the lead. I would drop the caption line. The colours need to be changed on the first dog more true colour to the animal. Possibly play with the colour scheme, If you have any further ideas on how to spruce this up bit. i am interested. I like the idea of the dogs running.

Can you try putting the lettering from entry #5 to entries #14 and #13. I like the way its going can you spruce it up a bit more.

Starting back on your first submission #5.
Keep the text as is.
Change the swoosh to the gold colour of the text in #8.
Look for a different yellow for the dog. i know this part is harded. The colour yellow on the other submisions just isn't working.

second idea:
Change the swoosh to a blue and do the other items listed above. See the blue in #8.

It is basically between the 2 of you.

Forgot to mention since we were starting from the first submission, drop the text below the name.

Let me know if you want any more changes. Thanks

(This comment references Entry #17)