Can change the look of a the word Bare, the brown shadowing behind the A R E makes it look to blocky. It’s very close for the 5th spot as I have three creatives neck and neck
Nice job giving it a more lighter feel , now just soften up the word Bare , remove scratches add paw print ( without claws) have paw in the shape of a heart symbolizing love for nature .
Thanks for another entry, this one has a little to much jungle/nature going on, where its at the point that we could over convey the message. Try something new, like taking the bear out of the O in golden and adding a SUN. Have a baby golden bear or some raw sketching of a bear that's memorable. Maybe its just his look that's memorable, maybe he's doing something. ( Just to give you examples, and not for you to use, because we want to see your creativeness, other contestants have used a super hero bear flying over the name, a bear eating peanut butter.. etc.. It just has to be fun and memorable, without losing site of the target demographic and that it's a natural company. You already have a great font and thought process on the name, so focus on what's around it.
Hope that helps!
Nice Job! Much better!! I like it. Can I also see in color of peanut butter (Golden brown) and instead of a paw in the A make it a claw scratch connecting the two lines? Keep up the good work, your on to something, this is one of my 3 favorites.
Thank you for updating- a few comments: I love what you did with the word bare, its awesome! However we need to get the word golden to look just as natural and wild. Try using a different bear or have something other then the mountains, it reminds me of coors light beer, but you are definitely on the right track with your creative font for the name.
Can I see this in brown and golden yellow? Maybe empathize the words gold differently just to see some different variations. Maybe using bear claw marks as the e in the word bare
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Hope that helps!
Best,
Mr. P. Nut
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