When I get home at lunchtime I plan on making one with the Golden on Top bear in the middle and Bare on the bottom to see. Any other requests just let me know. Perfect look for Whole Foods, Fresh Market and anywhere else you what to be.
Thanks for all the direction. We have to create our own bear. But I can draw hime however you like except like another designers. I'm going to use my iPad to sketch up something different, but guidance on what you think is cooler is greatly appreciated. I like how he looks proud.
Your not exactly there, but you’ve showed a lot of effort, so im hoping that when you see some of the other designs in the next round you can make adjustments .
Here’s my feed back on what you could do to be more inline with what we are looking for and what others are doing. - first strip the wooden back ground and let’s focus on just the name . You’ve gotten it to look more wild, but not more natural. I would still experiment with other raw fonts, and change the color, maybe to a golden brown ( peanut butter ) color. Find an image of a bear , that connects to what our company is trying to portray . Your on the right track though, you just need some refinement .
Hi Kent , much better attempt the last , you are starting to get a feel for the natural wording .. it still can be a little more raw and wild , maybe putting a paw in the a of bare .. Also try some other variations of a bear, this is a lifestyle brand so eventually we will sell more then jus peanut butter . Be open and creative ;) you’ve done just enough hard work to sneak you in to the top 10 .
Thanks for another entry! It’s a very creative interpretation, but to refine and edgy for the logo we are looking for . The logo ultimately has to convey the brand message which is : natrual RAW organic and elite. Although I dont dispute that your is not memorable, I do think it’s to modern . Try again think natural / wild , make the bear unique , what will stand out about ur design? Hope that helps , don’t give up , go back and read the brief and keep trying;)
Thanks Mt. P Nut! This is a product I would love to buy. I love peanut butter almost too much :) We can't really work on full label designs here just mainly logos but I will work on this till it is the perfect fit for you. I'm here to help even long after the contest is over. Thank you for this opportunity - Kent
Thank you for your entry! I like your creativeness, but a couple of things that I'd like to see differently. The name of the company should be more pronounced, maybe inside the bear in not a good place for the name or any written words since you have space restrictions. The name itself should give off the impression of being natural and wild. Would this pop off a shelf ? Maybe add another color like white in there. Another question to ask why designing it , is what's memorable about this bear or design, is it fun or unique? The name and logo should be able to stand alone, meaning that a consumer can Identify with either of as a Golden Bare product. Hope this helps, look forward to seeing some more variations.
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Do you have other suggestions? I can work on the bear more if you wish. Or hand drawn type? Thanks
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Hope you have further direction for me. Thank you!
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My idea was to show the bare peanuts in the shape of a Bear in the ground. Look forward to any feedback you might have.
Thanks - Kent
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Take care - Kent
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