after reviewing the logo with my marketing team , they had some concerns on the clarity of the word Bare. We decided to go with entry #91 or this one . Can you please just change the O in Golden to the one we have that you have in the winning entry?
Hi and thank you very much! I worked on the leaf and O. Think looks much better now.. #217
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This is going to be the winner!! Congrats!!! I just need the leaf on the O touched up before I can submit. Let's connect on whatsapp In case I had any further questions with regards to the logo.
I’m more then likely going with this as the top one, can you enhance the color of the leaf to more of a golden tone ..I’d like to see what that looks like
I think I like the original boarder color you had around the circle like in this one. Thank you for getting everything done, in a timely manner , I will let you know which of the 3 we will enter .
Last thing .. I promise lol remove the plants on this one and change the A to the new paw . Then I will pick of the three to poll agaisnt the rest . Thank you! :)
One last thing , that I want to see, is take out the A in Bare completely and replace with a paw ( preferably a cub) it’s softer. Then you could add a little line to it to give an appearance of an a
Maybe if the sun was a different color other then white, maybe gold are brown , it would look a bitter better. you can also trying leaving the O out all together and just putting a golden sun in it's place.
I just think it would add an element of nature, while also removing some some of the access design inside the box. Because those plant draw attention away from the name, so why not just make a small piece of them part of the name design
Make the bear inside this one, like the one I have ranked 1st.
Leave out heart on the inside of A in the word bare and replace with bear paw inside instead of on top.
Enhance or create something unique with word Golden, maybe its a sun in the O etc.. Must be subtle though, don't want to take away to much from your design.
Here's what I want to experiment with on this. I want to be sure that sure that name can stand alone, even if there is no bear. So what i'd like to see is something done to the gold. It just has to be very simple, maybe a sun behind the O, or make the O brighter then the rest of the letters in golden. I'l let you decide, but be sure that it's subtle enough that it doesn't clutter the rest of the design. ;)
I like the bear that you’ve been using as recently as #158. This one looks like a wolf . And what I was referring to was a whole differnt logo. If u want to stay around the same theme thats fine, but it should look different then your first . Once a winner is selected we will fine tune one of the logos for completion.
Just as a point of reference and so I have at least two choices from each creative , I want you to build this logo up to compete with your other. Obviously fix the bear in the middle, but keep same font maybe add to it .
Great job of taking the feed back and using it . We are still a few more steps away from making this complete , but you’ve taken over the top spot ;) keep up the great work, and don’t rest your hat on one variation . Keep trying ways to make the name unique with out straying to far from your concent , that is natural , light , soft and lovable . Try the heart shape some variation of a letter on the name because it could express love for natural living . Love the work keep it up!
As I’m going through all of the entries and offering ideas and feedback , I thought of a cool idea for your style of logo offering a the name itself a little uniqueness. In place of the A in the word Bare , use a heart shaped bear paw. It’s softer and more gentler .
I think you need a great job, so I won't say anything negative, but there are a few variations i'd like to see:
-Take the slogan out of the circle, it looks to crowded, instead place it just outside underneath the logo.
-Move peanut plant down just a little to give space and more visibility to the name golden bare.
-For the circular tree stump the logo is inside, enhance the outside of the stump (maybe putting a brown ring around the white) so people can tell its a stump.
- Last I want you to keep experimenting with font variations. Maybe putting a bear claw thru the word bare, or whatever your think would read natural and wild, something that would make it unique if it was just the name alone by itself.
Is there anyway for his face /snout to look more bearish instead that of a wolf? A couple of things to keep in mind for your next couple of variations. How do we connect the name and the logo are they enclosed in a circle? The inside brown out side white so it pops? Are there other ways to connect the two? Can we make the font read more wild and organic? I'm interested to see what ideas you have next. Use your own creativity as well, you don't have to go by exactly what was said.
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Congrats again you did an AMAZING job! so pleased with the result. This logo might make you famous one day ;)
Best,
Phil
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Have a nice day
DL
Leave out heart on the inside of A in the word bare and replace with bear paw inside instead of on top.
Enhance or create something unique with word Golden, maybe its a sun in the O etc.. Must be subtle though, don't want to take away to much from your design.
Mr. P. Nut
Mr. P. Nut
-Take the slogan out of the circle, it looks to crowded, instead place it just outside underneath the logo.
-Move peanut plant down just a little to give space and more visibility to the name golden bare.
-For the circular tree stump the logo is inside, enhance the outside of the stump (maybe putting a brown ring around the white) so people can tell its a stump.
- Last I want you to keep experimenting with font variations. Maybe putting a bear claw thru the word bare, or whatever your think would read natural and wild, something that would make it unique if it was just the name alone by itself.
Thanks! look forward to more variations!
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Mr.P. Nut
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Mr. P. Nut
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DL
Thanx
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DL