OK, so we are really liking #15 and #17. Some us like the simplicity, but others are suggesting that there be a little more to it. So here are a couple thoughts:
1) Could we do something else to make the hand/arm EVEN more masculine? I realize we already did this, but it would be interesting to see what it looks like when we are really emphasizing the protection provided by the arm. Something strong that protects the children.
2) Is there anything we could add to spice the logo up a bit? Maybe some texture behind the words or some other image/shape to pull it all together?
Sorry, the line effect above the text has been made by other designer in #1. if I doing it means I'm violating the rules at LT. Thanks for understanding.
I'm Sorry, to put a curved line above the text was not different enough. Please try to imagine, if you remove the sun in the form of entry #1 it will look similar to the idea you requested. Thanks...
Thanks again for all your work. One additional thought we would like to see: could we make the exclamation point the same color as the letters in "go"?