João, You were a contender from the beginning. Thank you for making all the modifications to keep in the game. MW’s Fibonacci spiral stole my heart. Thank you for competing. - Mark
Could we try some pale yellow, teal, grey on each strand for the full circle of the strand and repeat? I'm not looking for a gradient. I'm looking for the whole strand to be one color.
I think I can articulate what I didn't like about the font now. I think it was a bit too artsy. I'm looking for something clean modern maybe even scientific.
I'm not a fan of that font though I have to say I don't have any good reasons. Could you try another San serif font and please make it have a little less weight
I didn't anticipate that that capitalization makes it read "GOD" pop out. We're going to have to try Go Deeper. I prefer the dark blue/black waves for a monochrome logo. Let's fix the letter ing on that one and put it aside. Then lets' see if there a a way to make a multicolored version. But the multicolored bersion would have only dark colors.
The darker colors work better than than the lighter colors like green and yellow for making a distinctive shape that has a wholeness and interesting parts. I would like to try "GO Deeper" for capitalization.
I have been at a wedding today and I wanted to give you some quick feedback before I went. Now that I have more time, let's tune this a bit further:
1. Let's trying put initial caps on both words to more clearly distinguish them. I would also add a tad a more space between the words. probably less than a half space. Use your judgment.
2. This one is a bit too monochromatic. Let's do a few more colors as you did in the first one. It was the green I objected to. I also like more saturated colors and jewel tones. I love the velvet nature of grey next to cranberry, but it seems to make the waves look washed out. Sorry for the error in art direction.
I like the symmetry and the abstraction of brain waves. I like the Go inside and the Deeper outside. I'm not a fan of the color scheme. Maybe add some cranberry or grey.
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Was a great pleasure to work with you for sure.
Thank you very much and good luck for your business my friend!
Kindly Regards,
João
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Hope all is well with you.
Yes sure i can, please check a few renditions for your appreciation and let me know what do you think.
As always i will be around if you need anything else.
Thank you.
Kindly regards,
João
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I´m glad you like it. Yes sure i can, please check variation and let me know if it´s all okay.
Feel free to ask if you need anything else.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Please check my revision and let me know if it´s that the direction.
If you nee anything else just let me know.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thank you for the feedback as always.
Please check variations done for your appreciation and let me know your thoughts.
Anything else you may need just let me know.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I appreciate your quick feedback.
I´ve already submited variations on dark background and on the gradient dark background also so you can considerate.
If you need anything else just let me know.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Please check these two revisions, its was coincidence you were commenting right now, let me know what do you think of these 2: #48 | #49
If you need anything else just let me know.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Yes sure i can, please check revision bellow:
- #41
The font it´s more rounded so it harmonize well with the waves.
As always feel free to ask if you need anything more.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I appreciate the great tips. Yes makes sense. Please check variations so you can considerate and let me know what do you think.
As always feel free to ask if you need anything more.
Thank you.
Kindly regards,
João
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I´ve submited revisions with "GO Deeper" so you can compare.
Yes that color combo it´s also one of my favorites, i´m glad you like it.
Anything else you may need just let me know.
I will probably need to leave home in few minutes, but i will be back again at night, here in Portugal is 3:41 pm.
Thank you.
Kindly regards,
João
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Hope you had a great weeding.
I appreciate the great feedback. please check revisions based on your comment and let me know what do you think.
As always feel free to ask if you need anything else.
Btw what´s your name? If you want to share.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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1. Let's trying put initial caps on both words to more clearly distinguish them. I would also add a tad a more space between the words. probably less than a half space. Use your judgment.
2. This one is a bit too monochromatic. Let's do a few more colors as you did in the first one. It was the green I objected to. I also like more saturated colors and jewel tones. I love the velvet nature of grey next to cranberry, but it seems to make the waves look washed out. Sorry for the error in art direction.
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Hope you´re having a great weekend.
Thank you for your great feedback
Submited a variation for your appreciation, please check and let me know what do you think.
If you need changes feel free to ask please.
Your feedback is always welcome.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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