Go Camper JapanLogo Design Contest

Hi Mplusc!

Thank you for your entree! We like it! It has many clear Japanese features.
Could it become a little more vibrant/alive?
the font/words into 1 style as especially camper is a vital word

Thanks again and looking forward to your next step,

Sandor

Thanks for the update!

it is more alive but not what I meant, it gets a bit too full
please no trees and no kanji-letters

lets go back to your first, #5, can you maybe get movement in by doing something with the camper? for example like #3 or 4 which seem to be driving?

thanks for the feedback and updated rankings. I've uploaded #9 and added lines behind the camper to suggest movement and slanted the entire van a little to further add to the moving effect. Hope you like it!

i've added #10 with a bigger red sun in the background.

Thanks!
9,10 and 14 we like all... so letting it simmer for a while, and thinking about it

will be back,

Sandor

Thanks Sandor for the message. I appreciate it.

Hi there,

Back with your 1st entree; #5 but with some improvements based on your other entrees
Could you please make #5 but
with size of #9 (so a bit bigger)
the camper of #9 (moving) but without the swooshy stripes behind it
the word Camper more clear, maybe same grey but bold?

Thank you!

Sandor

Thanks Sandor for the message. I'm working on it now.

Hello Sandor, please see #21 and #23 for the changes. Thanks!

about #21, could you please make Go into black color, and slightly thinner/different from Camper?
(like in your first one, #5, you made 3 words)
in #21;
Japan, is ok
Camper is more important then Go so it is more bold, so it is ok
Go to be black and a little different

Thanks, seems we are close to the final now!

Thank you for this feedback. I am working on this now and will upload the changes in a few minutes.

Hello Sandorirr! I've uploaded #24 for the changes. Let me know if this is what you had in mind. Thanks!

I've uploaded #25 with the Camper still in the original gray and Go in black.

not entirely;
please keep Camper as it was in #21 (grey)
but make Go black (and thinner, like you did in 24)

Ok, please take a step back, entrees start to mix up now
24 and 25 are different from 21!

please use 21, no changes to the camper-image or sun or anything
and please use the words Go and Camper from 25, put them into #21

;-)

You are correct. I apologize for that confusion, i've uploaded #26 for the correct revision.

no worries, now you got it!
let me consider and get back later

tnx

Hi mplusc,

Time to finish up so you can get paid ;-)
Could you maybe add an appropriate Trademark-sign in the logo please?

Thanks,

Sandor

Thanks Sandor, i've uploaded #38 #39 #40 for viewing purposes only of the TM symbol in three locations. Just want to inform you about the rules of logotournament discouraging us designers to use trademark symbols in the design to avoid legal problems in the US. It is explained further here - https://logotournament.com/help/designer/133

If you have already registered your company name GoCamper Japan then i guess it is ok to use the TM mark here.

I recommend that you pick the winning entry without the TM mark and i can just add that later when i send the final files during our turnover. That way we avoid any legal issues that we might encounter as advised by the rules of Logotournament.

OK, thanks, good advice, lets do that.
#40 in that case, with TM slightly smaller please

Sandor

Thank you Sandor for understanding. I will now withdraw the three examples and reduce the tm mark in #40.

I can email you directly the sample via email if you want.

just provide me your email address so i can email the sample revision on #40. Thanks Sandor.

it is sandor.lrr@gmail.com
and my thanks are to you ;-)