gloupLogo Design Contest

Please Check #416 and #417.

Hi artisan! You can do it now :)

Hello, gloupsoup,
My rank is 5th! That's why, I can't give revision. Only 1st position designer can give revisions in the selection phase, that's the rule.

Hi artisan!
We think the g is still very beautiful but the rest of the letters don't quite add up.
l: is too sharp and pointy compared to the g
o: lacks certain springiness and proportions when compared to the g
u: is a bit wonky and feels too sharp with edges
p: is very wonky and is not good

Check #286.

This is great! I think the following things are important here: the l looks very basic and too straight compared to the rest of the letters; the p has too many unnecessary notches and bits to it. One of my favourite designs.

Please check now #280.

Hi artisan. Thank you for the updated entry. This is very useful and will be selected for the next round for sure - however, one thing that I will definitely want to see is the opposite of what you've done - using that first nice lower-case g you used in previous logos and making the LOUP into lowercase loup that fits the style of it.

Thanks for ranking my Entry. Please check revision #256 and If you need any more changes please suggest me. I'll try my best.
Best Regards,
Artisan

Thank you artisan. I think the LOUP is a bit too dominant and features letters that feel capital whereas the g feels lower-case - I think doing the whole thing lower-case might be the way t o do it and to make the loup a bit smaller compared to the g, and making the top of the O a bit less dirty and a bit nicer with the curves but it's looking good! If you've reached the limit of entries that's all good, we'll see how it goes into the next stage.

Please check my New Entry #216. And there is a limitation on submitting entries here, if you don't rank, I won't be able to submit any more entries. Already I submitted 10 Entries.

Hi artisan, thank you for your review - but your beautiful g from last logo lost all of its curves! Would you be able to make something that relates to that g from the first one I liked but to fit the shape of the circle? My sketch was only a rough guideline :)
Thank you!

Please check #187 and #188.

I've attached an additional reference drawn with pencil, something that's within that circular shape as if it's fat on soup.

the G is fantastic! a bit spermy in its feel but perhaps that's not the end of the world; I'd love for it to become more like spilled soup seen in a bowl from top view, kinda like the Voices Radio logo or a bit more organic towards some of the other references included.