GlosscreteLogo Design Contest

Some potential Lawrie but its hard to read and the word v concrete scale all wrong. It looks like zoomed in concrete with a tiny word.

Can you alter the perspective of the slab, reduce the size of the stones and then float the word above so it can be read easily

Hi Brett,

#61 - The text must go below the slab on the longest edge otherwise it just appears too small.

Lawrie

Hi Lawrie. Thanks. Please change perspective the other way - the back part lower. Also stones are too dense in the slab, so to speak.

#62 - As you can see, putting the Name above the slab on the shorter edge makes the company name too small. Honestly it has more impact in #61.

L

Yes I understand that. I am trying to get you to make the slab smaller by altering the perspective. Slightly smaller than 47

OK. Hold on a sec…

#63 - ?

Oops, I mean #64 - Is this better?

Yes but better at the bottom fron

#65

Concrete is too dense with stone.

Can you please try small writing in orange

Brett,

I can't submit any revision while you have my design at 2nd place.

Only the 1st place designer can upload.

Thanks,

#108 and #109 - Choice of orange shades for small text.

Thanks.

Hi Lawrie. Are you prepared to lodge another entry if we rank you at number one for a while. We like your design but there are a couple of things we think could be improved. Can you remove the faint lines on the slab and word. Then, come up with a nicer looking slab that is slightly thicker. We would like to compare that with the other designs we have been working on.

#146 - Hi Brett. Do you mean like this?

Thanks. Words look good, but the slab does not look nice enough. I will upload another image. Can you do the texture over the front edge of the slab too.

#147