Entries 14-21: What is working for me: the symbol. If you want to make changes, first I like the spacing between the symbol and the words Glen Oaks Escrow (see your #18. All the rest are too close or are touching. I don't want to see the symbol floating so that removes 15, 19-21.
If you want to rework #18 but make the G read more like a G rather than a circle with an opening. And find a new font. This serif font isn't what we are looking for. Please see entry # ____ for a bold serif font which I do like or switch to sans serif.
IMPT: the name Glen is spelled with one n only! "Glen" not "Glenn"
Entry #53 is my favorite because it is the cleanest / least busy of the designs. Please give me more space between the Glen Oaks line and the Escrow line.
Please go a little darker on the green -- please see the First Republic Bank green and use as the darkest green: www.firstrepublicbank.com/
Please match thickness of the Initial Caps (G and O) to the small caps. This is bothering me. The G and O are standing out too much.
I like #64. Please replace the lighter green with taupe to match PMS 7536. If you don't have a PMS book, just pick a medium taupe. And please change the color for ESCROW to the taupe also.