Sorry forgot to say no script fonts with flourishes. Also we need something bolder and stronger than this. It's nice, just not what we are looking for.
Hmm, I don't dislike this, it's just not what we need. It is too abstract and we would choose to have the words Glen Oaks highlighted before Escrow. In this design, I see Escrow first.
Charles, there is no hope of me selling this design if you don't follow my directions of taupe and eggplant (which is a deep dark purple with a little red in it)