Hi, I really sorry, I'm on weekend with my family right now, I'll able to send you the revision in sunday night, I'll update the design as soon as I reach my PC at home. I hope you understand, sorry for this inconvenience.
Hey Ed, I think if we just made the outline/lines of the nose thinner and less bold that would help. It doesn't need to stand out so much. Sorry I'm so OCD but this stuff drives me crazy.
I like it. The second slight from the right looks the best, with the mild shadow. Can they all look like this? And maybe add the green inside the eyes as well as the outside like it is on the outside edges of the logo.
The green is in the outline of the Scrambler logo as well, but it looks like its supposed to be part of it. This needs to be thinner green line, or maybe on the inside of the black line?
Also, we need to figure out Gladiator Gang. Was thinking of having Gladiator above Gang and having them the same size width wise, stacked onto each other.
Okay, never mind that. Looking at the original designs I like the bigger more bold grill slots. So don’t do any more revisions until further notice. Nose looks better.
And don’t you think the slots should be getting smaller and smaller as they get close to the cheeks, to make them appear to be wrapping around the face, slightly?
Is there any way to give the slots some slight shading or fading, everything else is faded/shaded, except the slots... and eyes. Eyes looks perfect though
Also, the mohawk needs to be about 1/2 or 2/3 the current size, it’s so out of proportion, and the chin/slots needs to be a lot longer, overall. I’ll send a mockup
Could we make the nose lines get thinner as they came to a point, similar to the other lines above the eyes, coming from the sides of the head above the ears
Yes, exactly what I meant! But, can you make the slots slightly shorter so they’re not so close to the nose, and have the angle slightly more V shaped, matching the shape of the bottom angles a little more. But yes, we are on track!
I’ll send what I mean, but keep in mind, I just want the top of the slots ANGLE to appear flat, exactly like the bottom, not an actual line going accross
Do you think we should make the jaw area slightly longer? I did some crappy mock ups and it looks slightly more proportionate if it’s just a tad longer
No, not what I was expecting. I’ll try to open photoshop tonight and see if I can figure out how to tweak the shapes first and then have you do if, I’m literally brand new to PS so I have almost no clue what I’m doing LOL
Do you think we could match the longest point dead center in the mohawk, with this the 7 slots, I mean make the 7 slots identical to the long point in the mohawk in the middle, fat at the top, skinny at the bottom, not curved, just straight, but also faded a little?
I just can’t figure out what way matches the rest of the lines, something is just off about all these. You see the points in the Mohawk, and above the eyes, how can we get these 7 slots to match but still be bold, and look natural?
how about this one? instead of pointy, I make the lower part of the grills following the contour of the bottom part of the helmet, so it will blend perfectly with the helmet. Please let me know what you think.
Tweak the shape of the grill slots, maybe make them a little pointy at the ends of get narrow? Something to make them more aggressive like the rest of the logo
Still needs to be a lighter grey, still looks dark. Also, what can we do to the slots for the grill, they need to follow the chin shape a little better.
As the solution, I can make this brighter, and keep the another one as it is. So you will have two designs, which will be suitable for each backgrounds. What do you think?
Hi, for the tone, its all about optical illusion. Both this one #480 and #469 are exactly using same tone/color.
You see #469 brighter because it use black background, so your eyes tell you that it is brighter.
And also you see this one #480 darker because it use white background, so your eyes tell you that it is darker.
Little too extreme, needs to be very light and less foggy looking. But better than the black and white for sure. I’ll try to find more examples. I’m learning photoshop so maybe I can edit it and show you what I mean
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The part between the eyebrows and the mohawk, maybe a little shorter.
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Or make the black thicker, something to make the green just an ACCENT, not over powering
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Has to have GREEN, bright green outline or accents. That’s our color. Let’s see a bunch of variations with green accents or highlights
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"The pointy nose takes away from the amount of space we have for the slots, right?"
could you explain more?
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The nose and eyes need to be updated like the latest revisions.
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You see #469 brighter because it use black background, so your eyes tell you that it is brighter.
And also you see this one #480 darker because it use white background, so your eyes tell you that it is darker.
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I'm sorry I don't really understand that.
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Thanks,