Hi zrox,
We knew you would come up with something completely different than everyone else. And we were not disappointed. Here are a few suggestions:
-Can you make the globe image bigger? It's such a neat thing that you've done with the "g" looking like a shoe. We really like that. It's very unique.
-Can you sharpen up the company name and slogan? It would be great if that really popped out some how and grabbed everyone's attention. The colors are not nearly as important as the overall look. The more distinct the better. We do like the blue and green that you chose to use...Can you add some type of black or white bubble out line around the company name?
-As for the number #17 entry we really love it, but would love to see the "inc" added. Also, we really would like to see if you can find a way to creatively display the slogan "Inspiring Social Change through Athletic Participation." Honestly, no image needs to be added to entry #17 because the design acts both as an image and a text. It's great. Can you add a white or black bubble outline around this image in one of your various sketches of this? It would be great to see an entry with the new suggestions with this bubble outline and one without the bubble outline so we can compare the different looks.
Thanks again for your entries thus far and your encouragement for feedback. We'll provide as much feedback as you would like if it helps.
Take care and keep up the amazing work.
Jon, co-founder
Giving Athletics, Inc.