Hi designjunction,
We love your interpretation. You are our number 3 choice at this point. Here are the changes that we would love to see you make to improve your design to meet our needs:
-Can you make the slogan come completely around the globe? We would love to see it end at the bottom of the "wings" near the shoe.
-Can you change the shoe to be more athletic looking?
Everything else about the design is great. We really love how colorful and well defined everything is. If you can make these few changes you will have a great design for our needs.
Best of luck during your final changes. Thanks again for your time and your entries.
Jon, co-founder
Giving Athletics, Inc.