Gilbert and Lawrence MusicLogo Design Contest

#4 could you take out the word "all" in the tag line

# 3 to Don Gato. Can you please:
1- Make the clef sign and also the & symbols less pronounced
2- Make the name Gilbert and Lawrence slightly more pronounced
3- Make a version with and without the tag line "it's about the love of music"
thanks.

# 16- Don Gato, can you change the font style to number 20. thanks.

#20 Don Gato- can you please try to do this?
Even though the clef is down played (in #1) it is still too much with the ampersand. (should not occur at the same time – visually confusing/too similar)
The ampersand is too bold/big.
I would lose the all caps title case (knock down the G, L).
There is some elegance lost with the heavier font weight on Gilbert, Lawrence
Gilbert & Lawrence is the bill so music should be smaller and possibly centered underneath (maybe charcoal instead of black).

#42- Please see comments below. thank you
Hi Ron,

Here are Paul’s comments on logo #41:



#41 is good. They morphed the Ampersand and Clef together. Smart move. Initially, it appears as almost the same symbol. I think this concept can be worked around a little more. Maybe a little more conservative clef, possibly a square box, lighter than black. The circle works because of the curves in the clef but this example may be too liquid.

item #1 Don Gato
Hi Ron,

There were a couple more comments that Paul had, but overall he said that the one you have ranked #1 is the best and it is a good logo. I know you are running short on time with this (if you have any time left at all). You can go with #1, and if anything have him just lighten the circle behind the ampersand/clef a little bit. What he did on the edits on page 2 is too light. Just a couple of shades lighter would do the trick. Thanks.