Get Thin ForeverLogo Design Contest

Re: #3 - Thanks for the submission!

Although I want it somewhat feminine, the purple and pink will scare off the guys. The swoops, although they do look good, are generic at this point - you seem them all over the place.

Hello, here is another concept for your logo. Thanks for the feedback.

(This comment references Entry #7)

#22 and #23 have the right colors (so #7 is out). Looks good! The measuring tape squishing the thin "THIN" is a good idea... however, for whatever reason, it makes the "THIN" look fatter for some reason. The "THIN" also is visually receding too much compared to "GET" and "FOREVER". Perhaps the "GET" could be smaller?

This is a good design idea, but you'll somehow need to find a way to accentuate the "THIN" and make it look nice and slender.

Finally, it somehow has to communicate more femininity.

Thanks again, these look nice!

Thanks, the THIN looks better now (so #23 and #22 are out).

1) I'm wondering what flipping the colors around looks like - #30 make GET / FOREVER green and THIN blue; #31 GET / FOREVER green and THIN white. I'm thinking that would make THIN "pop" more.

2) I'm also wondering what making GET / THIN same color would do. This emphasizes the phrase "get thin... forever" as opposed to "get forever... thin" which is what it is now.

3) Still looking for femininity. Maybe a curvy squiggle of some kind, or a font choice? I have no idea.

Thank you for all of your feedback. I tried to make the logo a bit more feminine by making the "I" in THIN curve and adding a curved line at the bottom. I think the yellow pops more than the green on blue.

(This comment references Entry #40)

Re: #40 - yes, the yellow definitely pops more! The curvy "I" looks good, at least at first glance.

The horizontal squiggle is nice, but looks kind of generic. I'm wondering what it would look like to have a vertical squiggle on the left of the words instead of a horizontal one below - the squiggle would represent the right half of a woman's silhouette from neck to thigh? Curvy but thin...

If you really nail the right squiggle, that'd turn into a wonderful graphic mark that I could reuse in other contexts too.

Again, thanks for the feedback. Here is the revised logo with a curved figure.

(This comment references Entry #43)

Re: #43 - Nice! I'll take another look at this tomorrow morning with fresh eyes. It's close...

One thing's for sure - the squiggle needs a little more white space between it and the words.

i moved the squiggle over more...

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Re: #44. I think the squiggles need to be on the left side of the words. Even a bit more whitespace too.

I don't have precise feedback on the squiggles, so all I can do is wave my virtual arms a bit. They're close, but not close enough. They need to be elegant, and they're not yet. Perhaps it's their ends being round? When I look at them I think "earthworm" which isn't good.

I understand the need for asymmetry between the two squiggles, but perhaps the size difference is a bit much - perhaps the little one needs to get a bit bigger.

Again, it's the squiggles that would put this design over the top. The words and THIN are fine, but don't really stand out from the crowd. The squiggles have the potential to do so.

Sorry I can't be more specific!

- Bill

Thank you for your feedback. Here is the same concept with a different icon. Please let me know if I am getting closer to what you are looking for. Thank you.

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Re: #59. Urgh, sorry, but no, I don't like those squiggles as much. I like them better on the left side - that was good - but not as squiggles.

I'm probably going to drive you nuts, sorry about that.

I wish I could put into words what I'm looking for. I do know that the designs with figure-like things in them that are resonating with me have implied movement and lightness to the figures. They're not static.

I hope that helps.