Thanks for the submissions! These are really nice.
Re: #82 - Very good text, not sure anything needs to change there. The graphic is critical. I like the dynamic feel to the shapes you've got. The designs that I resonate most with all have a spirit of "breaking free" and "lightness". Yours is close on those fronts right from the start. (In contrast, with several other designers, it took iteration after iteration to get it - you got it right away.)
What needs to happen is make it something that a middle aged lady would mentally associate themselves with, getting back to that carefree girl she used to be. The graphic has some of that already, but is a little too abstract. I like simple, and more evocative than representational, but... it's just a bit too abstract now.
I hope that helps!
Re: #81 - This is way below top10 because I put only one of each concept in the top10 - I think that's fairer to all the designers given what I understand about the point system around here. It's not that I like this one that much less than the other one. It's almost a toss-up between the two - accentuate the logo, or make sure the tag line is readable? Both are valid (and heck, once I get the EPS I can do either or with a little work).
Re: #83 - very nice look, and I appreciate having a totally separate design concept to choose from. In this case, it's all too static. Something that's become clear to me after judging all the entries is that there needs to be an inherent dynamicism to the logo - a sense of forward movement. This one just sits on the page looking solid and peaceful. Very nice, but wrong feel.
Re: #113 - thanks so much for the reworking of this!
It's a great concept - I can see a woman in the lines, but the energy seems to be down, and she could lose some weight. #82 is still superior at this point.
I really appreciate the effort to come up with another graphic concept!
Thanks again for all your hard work! A lot of people in the focus group liked your design - it really stood out, and was very strong.
I hope you'll enter future design contests we'll be having. I'll be producing several related products over the next couple of years, and really like your design sense.