Sorry this isn't what you were looking for. I would revise my design, but unfortunately I'm not in the Top 5 designers for this phase of the contest, so I wouldn't be able to submit my revisions.
Thanks again for the feedback. Unfortunately, I'm not ranked high enough in your contest to be able to submit more entries. Your contest is once again in the Top 5 phase, where only the top 5 designers in this contest can submit more designs.