Much better. I think we need to work on the font some more.
Also, Please move the text just a little closer to the image. It would be great to see the image above the text as well.
Please look at the other images we like to see the different variations. I do like how you have used a slightly lighter blue on the "Generosity" than on the wave. Could you use just a little of that lighter blue as an accent on the wave.
Could you do one or two more quick revisions for me with the following features:
1. Put the "Wave G" to the Left and then use the title "Global Generosity Movement" to the right. 2. Same as #1, but include a subtitle: "Generosity Changes Everything" 3. Can you do one with the "Wave G" and then just the letters "GGM" (either to the right or below it)
Thanks. These are good....but the blues don't match. Can you make the text match the great blue of the logo? Please also try slightly larger sizes of text.