for Fifteenth GaRo Anniversary i think is more luxuries detail element , fleur de lis mixing with modern touching (silver element ) and classic Type of GARO word. In my design concept i want to tell about something expensive , strong brand (GARO) , and luxuries for 15th anniversary. i hope u like it..
We like the direction you are going with this. We need all the letters for Garo to be the same size. We also want a bit more emphasis on the fact that it is out 15th year.
Also we have some homework for you. We want to see the "Garo" with all the same font size and please put the word "habano" inside the "O" of Garo. This way you can put the "15TH ANNIVERSARY" where the Habano is now. See what you come up with.
as your recommended, there is two thing that i want to tell about this design. first, i have change the size of " garo " with the same size. and the second one i have change the 15th anniversary part with more straight and bold-look.