Hi Mr Moon,
Now we're cooking, liking the changes alot. Would you mind making a couple more for us, please?
The orange colour of Gall OZ is more the right colour, but now we just need it brighter/darker so it stands out more. I think it's shaded so darker at the bottom of the letters - if we can go with it all that dark, or are there some other ways you can make the words stand out more? Like that font though, so if we can keep that, would be good. Slogan seems to be fine - unless we switch the colours around - dark/bright orange for slogan and dark brown colour for company name? Not sure if that would work?
#58, #56 and #57 are all up there - perhaps on #56, just bring the slogan down a line so more centered between the bottom of the logo and the bottom of the lettering of Gall OZ. Again, no need to change style of font, as happy with that - just colourings still aren't quite right for us yet.
Thanks again for your designs, really liking the van!