#1 definetly on the right track - font needs to be bolder - perhaps more use of colour/ And can we get more of a 3d feel to the characters? Also appreciate holding hands symbolism but maybe try 2 characters and evoke supportive symbolism?!
Here is my revised designs. Layed out in two different formats. Thanks for the comment earlier, and additional comments would be great, think were getting close! Thanks,Pat
OK, you have me spinning here, but I did come up with another direction. This theory is: Coach in center, with mentoring, education and direction he is growing the other two in the visual. I hate trying to explain visuals to clients.... Cause I feel if you have to explain it.... Well it must not be to good. But this one is tough coming up with a visual that explains what a coach does and is.... Tag line would be helpful on this one! But any comments or questions would be great. Thanks, Pat
Appreciate your point - and feel i am dithering! But just seen an advert on local tv for a supermarket chain using 4 similar characters to #2 and #4 and the others look unicef?! Really like the feel - if my character brief is restricting then please ignore it.
Tag line might be ' creating a change in your future' or ' positive action creates future performance'