The shape of the burst will need work. I have received comments that it looks like water. I think the shapes of each hexegon tile needs more deifinition as well. Also can it be squared up to the F, its coming in a angle right now and I think coming in square will better than slanted as is.
Also please use come different shades of colors in the blue/purple/and gray spectrum. Nothing to high impact, clean and suttle appearance please.
I would like to see the pattern in a more elongated shape, my vision is to have this pattern as a stand alone symbol for our company as well as it being part of our logo. I picture this pattern: on the top of our building real large so you can see when driving from far away, maybe running down or across the sleeve of our shirts, back ground in our letter head, maybe vertically on all of our office doors. I think the finlay design is close, just need some refinement on the pattern and maybe font options. So above is what I told another artist and I wanted to share with you also.
But in regards to your design, I would like to see the font just changed so it's not leaning, not sure what that's called. And also maybe some work on the shape of the pattern, I think the way it.is now is our of balanced a bit.
Ultimately I would love to see this design refined as well as another design having the pattern be in a different spot and shape.
still really like this concept, just feel its to out of balance. I also envision the pattern to be more of a elongated footprint it will take up and not a "burst"
Im liking this!! Looks great but i feel its a bit heavy on the "burst", so i guess i would say it feels a bit un balanced to me. Iyts also a bit hard to ready the Fusion Metalworks as a whole, I need to make sure its all very easily read
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Do you mean like this?
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Thank you so much.
Best regards,
kassai
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Maybe the pattern can taper down and and to the left away from the Fusion?
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Also please use come different shades of colors in the blue/purple/and gray spectrum. Nothing to high impact, clean and suttle appearance please.
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But in regards to your design, I would like to see the font just changed so it's not leaning, not sure what that's called. And also maybe some work on the shape of the pattern, I think the way it.is now is our of balanced a bit.
Ultimately I would love to see this design refined as well as another design having the pattern be in a different spot and shape.
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