The elongated Hexogons with the line around eachother with the cluster of sparks all clash and fight for your attention - needs to be more cohesive and balanced
Nope - Im not looking for only what I suggest but for design to be implemented. This is just pluccing in the pattern in a rectangle shape, and adding a bunch of sparks. Its too busy and not simple and clean any more
I like this direction, but want to see more geometric shapes involved some how. My thought is the texture patern i attached could some how be a stand alone element next to the name?? Maybe it will fight with the design???
Overall I like this but not fully in love with it and think it needs more work to get to that point. Happy so far, thank you!
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Overall I like this but not fully in love with it and think it needs more work to get to that point. Happy so far, thank you!