In #78 we'd like to see the design without the laughing lectern.
In #76, we'd like to see the tagline written in the same style as #77. We'd also like to see if the smiling lectern can be toned down so it's not so comical. Perhaps a subtle smile. We'd also like to see the design with the lectern to the left of the tagline (simliar to the style of #75).
We really like #110. Our only concern is that it might not look corporate enough. So, here are some things we'd like you to consider:
1. Can you make the dot in "funnier" blue? 2. Please invert the symbol for inserting "funny" in the tagline. The point should be at the top. 3. Can you show us what "funny" would look like in a callout box similar to #83? 4. Is it possible to use stronger colors? These are more playful but perhaps there is a stronger combination that will make it look more corporate?
We really like the revision (#126). We just have a couple more options we'd like to see:
1. On this design, we'd like to see "funny" without the callout bubble (as in #125) 2. We'd also like to see "funny" written in different colors (red, blue and gray) to see which one works best. 3. The tagline is a bit hard to read. Can we see that differently so it's easier to read (like in #83 and #96).
Thanks again for your quick feedback. Please let me know if you have any other revisions. I should be able to get to them in the morning before the contest closes. Thank you for your consideration.
We're liking #127. We'd like to see a bit brighter red (not real bright) and we want to see the word "funny" in the same color as "speeches" but without the callout bubble (as in #136).
Also, we like the tagline font in #136 but "funnier speeches" is a bit too big. Can you scale back a bit on the company name - closer to the size in #127?