The new one (112) is a nice adjustment. We'd like to see Circle given the same weight as Full. Leaving Resources smaller works for us. I'd like to see the swirl of the ripple in the center piece of the graphic link into the ripple in the third...something closer to a triptych...the way they tail into one another from 1st to 2nd square is attractive
The new one (112) is a nice adjustment. We'd like to see Circle given the same weight as Full. Leaving Resources smaller works for us. I'd like to see the swirl of the ripple in the center piece of the graphic link into the ripple in the third...something closer to a triptych...the way they tail into one another from 1st to 2nd square is attractive
I expressed myself poorly...in looking at entry 112...look at cirle 1 and 2, how they sorta meet up, but it's not a strict line up..it looks like one flows to the next - that's what I was looking for from circle 2 to 3...that flow. TY so much for listening to what I suggested and adapting...I like the work, but feel 118 ad 119 line up too rigidly. The twisted in 119 is cool....the words look great and the colors are getting or at least feeling more vibrant....can you try a black background?
Your submissions continue to rank high with us (two of us judging, but ultimate decision is in hands of company owner.)
The one thing that keeps coming back at this moment is his uncertainty about the boxes in your logo when he is really stuck on circles....He left more feedback on the main discussion....We both believe he is probably overhtinking this and he
has been stuck on a few issues...he wants something simple, clean - he says, and yet goes back to resonating with images which are actually quite complex - the Bill Moyers website - if you look at it...he thinks his ideal is something along the lines of those colored boxes, only circles..he loves that feel, but I dont want the impression we're asking for plagerism of it. I know what he likes is the translucency of colors and textures, the overlapping which is bringing to him a sense of diversity and creativity and merging of ideas...
Can you let me know if you would like to post revisions? We realize we can only get revisions from one at a time right now - willing to open door if you have interest in submitting more. In particular, we'd like to see the orange replaced with a red... Just let us know if you still want in.
We'd like to see one with the following elements. (We'll be re-promoting you later today)
1. White background (we love the black, but have had to pull away from it for a different reason) 2. The orientation of the boxes on 148 3. Full weight given to the Words, "Full" and "Circle". Remove the word "Resources" 4. Remove and/or de-emphasis the splashes - concentrate on the ripples