FrukostfrallanLogo Design Contest

My version,
Thanks!,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #37)

Hi Tahia,

We like your version, but...

The sun behind it is hard too see from distance... this logotype will be printed so it needs to be visible from distance.

Also, the sand wich looks more like a hamburger. Can you make it to look more like a sandwich formed having a rectangular shape?

Instead of "Underground breakfast" you can write "Fralla åt alla" which is our slogan.

Thanks
Fredrik

HI Frederik,

So glad I got feedback on my design. Working on it.

removed the sun, changed the slogan. My design was a hamburger actually haha. That´s because I didn´t know what kind of sandwiches you offer. Do you think I should replace the meat with ham? The is rectangular already, maybe I should modify the side shadow color so it´s not so subtle.

I´ll be back with the new version,

Thanks!,
Nat

Update. please send me your comments.
Thanks!,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #43)

New sandwich update. Added more contrast so elements are more defined.
Thanks!,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #45)

Hi!,

I updated my sandwich and made some changes to the logo and proportions. All plain colors for easy print in any media, including silkscreen (plain colors needed).

in case you want to see changes please don´t hesitate to contact me.

Thanks!,

Nat

Thanks for your versions,

I will discuss them with my colleague and get back to you.

Thanks!. I´ll be around in case you need me.

Nat

Hi Tahia,

We like your version but we still think the sandwich looks to much like a hamburger. The sandwiches we are going to sell is not round, they are more shaped like a rectangle...

Also, the sun beams you had before were nice, but can you make them more visible?

If you can do these adjustments you are very near to be the winner of the contest.

Thanks

Hi!, sure, no problem. I

I think it´s because of the angle I gave to the sandwich (you can see frond and one side). And also it´s because of the feehand shape I gave to the bread. I´ll try a more straight line. Don´t worry. We´ll find the perfect sandwich :)

Nat

Updates: #67 and #68.

I´ll be around in case you need me or you want me to make changes.

thanks!,

Nat

Another version,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #69)

Another version,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #70)

Hi again,

We still don't like the look of the sandwich. Can you make it look more like the one in the link below?

See
http://www.alltforforaldrar.se/d_files/u611236/smorgas02.gif

Use this shape and these ingredients but make it a cartoon/clipart style. It should be easy to print, so it should not be too detailed. It will be printed on both big prints and smaller print paper.

Looking forward to see your version of the attached image sandwich.

Thanks,
Fredrik

Hi Frederik,

no problem. But the link you sent me shows a round sandwich and you´ll sell rectangular sandwiches, right? So I´ll make the sandwich look like this kind of sandwich but rectangular?

Nat

Something like this one?
Nat

(This comment references Entry #71)

Nice!!

What I meant with recangle shape was actually a shape like this:

http://giraffian.com/pictionary-files/r/rectangle.png

That is longer on one side than the other (not a square)

But for this one we would actually prefer the round one as in the picture I sent you. Then I think it will be great.

Or actually can you make one with this shape http://giraffian.com/pictionary-files/r/rectangle.png

but with ROUNDED CORNERS

That would be just perfect

Thanks

And also a bit higher at the top. The one you draw was just flat.

Hi!,

no problem.. working on it :)

Nat

Hi!,

how about this one? rectangular, with rounded corners and taller.

Thanks!,

Nat

(This comment references Entry #72)

Hi,

Still not good. Can you make it look like http://www.alltforforaldrar.se/d_files/u611236/smorgas02.gif ?

Please make the top bread look like it is on the image.

I didn't mean that the whole sandwich should be taller, just that the top bread should not be flat.

Thanks

Update,
I´m online in case you need me.
Thanks!,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #73)

my apologies
i dint mean to hurt you.
cheers
montosh

Can I get your email and msn/gtalk?

I want to discuss some things before we can select you as a winner.

Thanks

Hi Nat,

We would like to have the EPS files of the logotype asap! It's going to print tomorrow Monday (12 hours from now) so we would like to have it as soon as you can. Would that be possible? Sorry for the short notice.

Thanks
Fredrik

Hi Frederik,
sorry I am usually out on Sundays, so I didn´t get any of your messages today.

I´ll send you the EPS files now so you have the files first time in the AM (your time).

Nat