Thanks for entry #10. I like the sun, it's a nice symbol of newness and warmth. I also like the relative sizes of the fonts. I love the actual tree image. However, could you make it a total of seven trees please? And I prefer to use my image of the thorns in concept #1 in my uploaded document.
Also, the thorns should be in thorny font and fir tree in fir tree font.
Finally, the initial appearance appears to make a political statement. Could you change landscape/sun to be less political?
Entry #15 is almost what we are looking for. Please do the following: 1) I just uploaded a new image for the thorn tree. Please use this image of the thorn tree and size it to the same height as what you currently have for the thorns. 2) insert "Isaiah 55:13" BEFORE "Irrigation & Landscaping" for Option A; we also want to see Option B by inserting "Isaiah 55:13" AFTER "Irrigation & Landscaping"
Also, the final deliverable will be two logos using the same mark and almost all of the same words: 1) From Thorns to Fir Trees Irrigation & Landscaping, Isaiah 55:13 2) From Thorns to Fir Trees Rookie Division, Isaiah 55:13
thank you for the feedback here are updated entries with the adjustments you requested: #33 #34 #35 #36 #37 #38 #34 #40 #41 #42 please feel free to contact me if you need any revisions
Thank you for using our thorn image, adding Rookie Division, and Isaiah 55:13. It's VERY close. I apologize but I meant to say that I would like to see what "Isaiah 55:13" would look like on a separate line before and after "Irrigation & Landscaping". Would you make these quick changes for me? You can do it for just the Irrigation & Landscaping since I will have a good idea what it would look like for Rookie Division.
no problem :) here are updated entries with the adjustments you requested: #43 #44 #45 #46 #47 #48 please feel free to contact me if you need any revisions
We like #44 -- Isaiah 55:13 is centered and it looks good.
Please reduce the size of the thorn bush to the size of the smallest fir tree similar to your #15. This change plus one for Rookie Division and one for Irrigation & Landscaping should be the final deliverable.