I really like this concept and idea. A few comments:
- It would be great to see this concept with different font treatments and font styles. It would be really nice to see several, like 8 to 10 variations
- Can you also play with the "brown tones" for the house and try a few different options?
- It would be awesome to make the chimney look more like the "mitten" shape of Michigan. Not very detailed, but subtle. Here is a picture of the mitten - http://www.zazzle.com/murder_mitten_records_tshirt-235513517863609640. I want to make sure it still looks like a chimney, but with a Michigan influence.
- I am a fan of simple and clean designs, just a general thought.
I think you misunderstood, but we on the right track. Let's use the "mitten" standing up (like the shape you have as the chimney in the other designs) and put the box of fruit tucked into the mitten in the middle/lower right quadrant of the image. Very simple.
Ok, I am going to go with you as the winner, I just need a few different iterations on the concept without the circle.
Here are a few comments:
- I would like to use #47 as the concept to run with (no circle) - Let's change the font type and colors to the colors used in entry #56 (the brighter green and brown) - With the fruit, I would like to use the more bold colors (green and brown) that are found in entry #56. Also, can you move around the fruit or change the colors so no food is the same color as another piece of food right next to it. I would use a bit more bright and diverse colors for the fruit so it stands out. - On the "mitten" on the front of the box, let's make it blend in much more on the box and a bit more transparent.
- #59 is the right direction, but I do not want to use brown in the words and use a much lighter brown (or a green of some sort) for the box.
- Make the piece of food on the far right bright green and remove the item that is next to the blue bottle.
- Can we use something similar to the shades of green in #58 for the words. But put the words "Fresh Food" in the lighter green and "MI" in the darker bold green.
- Also, change the font style to something similar to #56
- The font color is too bright, please match is more to the entry #58. - Let's change the font to match exactly what is used on entry #58 - The piece of food on the right should not be so bright, make it a bit darker and change is to something like lettuce or something more fresh.