Dear Tanya... thanks a lot for your fantastic feedback and for your ranking :)
About your comments I'll change the cap making it a little darker and I'll use italics for the tagline, and the period.
About the colors that you comment I'm sorry for the inconvenience, but the rules of Logotournament don't allow us to "copy" concepts or other distinctive elements from other designers and specially don't allow us to make changes based in instructions where other design from other designer is involved... I'm sorry about that
But you can give to me or any other designer the specific color that you want, without references to other designs...
in this web:
http://kuler.adobe.com/#create/fromacoloryou can select the colors that you want (RGB numbers or HEX code (the number after the #))
if you give to me the colors will be a pleasure to change
thanks and again I'm sorry for the inconvenience
bests
fermat