Thankyou for participating #27 Great to see a splash of orange ! Too much green in text - this is a general comment to all. Take a look at font in #30? Balance is really nice but text looks a bit clumsy / old fashioned
general comment - we need white background (#27 ) #40 font is interesting - can we tone down teh "blackness of it" perhaps blue from icon for body with grey byline as is? Also can you play with the 3 colour logo to get sylised "FL"?
#145-147 icon are a bit too blocky for us #144 icon "swish" shapes are interesting. Can you stylise in this form into an FL ? - also Lindstrom is too washed out - need equal balance between names but colour variation is okay Cheers